Judge #3: No mystery or suggestive feeling as front is too open. Variation in length of bottom two jin would look better. Suggest shortening or removal of top jin.
Judge #1: Needs tighter foliage design
Judge #3: Material de muestra buen potencial. Más detalle tallado en punta de madera muerta mejoraría el diseño. (Material shows good potential. More detailed carving tip deadwood improve the design.)
Before This stock was collected free of charge from a garden makeover, initially joined to a larger clump it was seperated and planted into a polystyrene growing box. I chose this species to take me out of my comfort zone, as I have never worked with them [...]
Before Conocarpus erectus sericeus (silver bottonwood) Is a species similar to the green bottonwood that has all the great benefits of botonwoods plus the silver looking leafs, this is an interesting material with lots of deadwood that would probe to be [...]
Before Lately I’ve been giving some serious thoughts about styling and developing literati bonsai. This material caught my eye in the nursery and was bought for that end in mind. It is long and thin enough to suite the literati style and is flexible [...]